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Array ( [sid] => 15010 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => From a child's view [time] => 2003-03-27 12:45:00 [hometext] => I feel a child is innocent,and subjecting them to the loss of someone to war is overwhelming.This is what I think a child would be asking,having 3 children of my own. [bodytext] => Is today the end?Or maybe tomorrow?
A child asked, filled with sorrow.
Should I gather my thing's and wait by the door?
Or is my daddy leaving, alone for the war?
Did I do something wrong,is he mad at me?
Is this why he has to leave?
Will I see him again?Will he be back?
Did those people mean to make the attack?
Do they know that God loves them,and that he will forgive?
Don't they want to make God happy,
So my daddy can live?
Do a million people have to die,
before they end this selfish life?
Don't they know they can't pretend,
that only God know's the end?
And when he come's won't it be great?
But for some, will it be too late?
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From a child's view

Contributed by QTsunshinegirl on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Is today the end?Or maybe tomorrow?
A child asked, filled with sorrow.
Should I gather my thing's and wait by the door?
Or is my daddy leaving, alone for the war?
Did I do something wrong,is he mad at me?
Is this why he has to leave?
Will I see him again?Will he be back?
Did those people mean to make the attack?
Do they know that God loves them,and that he will forgive?
Don't they want to make God happy,
So my daddy can live?
Do a million people have to die,
before they end this selfish life?
Don't they know they can't pretend,
that only God know's the end?
And when he come's won't it be great?
But for some, will it be too late?

Copyright © QTsunshinegirl ... [ 2003-03-27 12:45:00]
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Re: From a child's view (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:53:54 PM AEST
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interesting perspective good write
Sharon

Re: From a child's view (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:06:21 PM AEST
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beautiful, nicely done.
Michelle

Re: From a child's view (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 04:15:21 AM AEST
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Great insightful writing. I wish we could help the children to understand but is there any hope when most adults don't fully understand?

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