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Anywhere, nowhere
I can’t find it.
Can’t separate one line
From the rest of lines

I’ve been holding my breath
For far too long
I forgot what this feels like
Living
And being alive

Constant moving
Don’t stop, Can’t stop
We have no reasons
When all we need is a rhyme
Live in this moment

I don’t live
All of life at once,
It’s too much
Tonight, I’ll live only
In these hours

When the sun comes up
I have nothing left to say
Light is shed,
The night is done
All my words are silenced.

Colors come back to the sky,
I cease to exist.
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When One Day Crashes Into the Next

Contributed by anomalei on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 06:27:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



My mind is everywhere,
Anywhere, nowhere
I can’t find it.
Can’t separate one line
From the rest of lines

I’ve been holding my breath
For far too long
I forgot what this feels like
Living
And being alive

Constant moving
Don’t stop, Can’t stop
We have no reasons
When all we need is a rhyme
Live in this moment

I don’t live
All of life at once,
It’s too much
Tonight, I’ll live only
In these hours

When the sun comes up
I have nothing left to say
Light is shed,
The night is done
All my words are silenced.

Colors come back to the sky,
I cease to exist.




Copyright © anomalei ... [ 2009-05-23 06:27:09]
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Re: When One Day Crashes Into the Next (User Rating: 1 )
by perfectdisaster on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 07:18:17 PM AEST
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It is sometimes a nice moment when one day crashes into the next.

All my words are silence, the calm.
Super poem.


Re: When One Day Crashes Into the Next (User Rating: 1 )
by elle on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 07:56:48 PM AEST
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Great post. . . I agree, if we're not living in the moment then it's not true existence. peace. elle


Re: When One Day Crashes Into the Next (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 09:04:58 AM AEST
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Wonderful! This is my favorite

I don’t live
All of life at once,
It’s too much

Tonight, I’ll live only
In these hours

When the sun comes up
I have nothing left to say
Light is shed,
The night is done
All my words are silenced.


Re: When One Day Crashes Into the Next (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 10:36:18 AM AEST
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Good write, very profound.

-Phil




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