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A second is worth both my future and past.
The more I denied my becoming insane,
The sooner insanity touched me at last.
The silence we hear is the laugh of my fate,
The soundless laugh at the one I forgot -
The yesterday's me - and the force to create
The life I portrayed. But it's less than I've got.
I love the invisible scars of my skin -
The blades of your hands are so tempting, indeed.
These words I give birth to just come from within,
Revealing the truth till the scars start to bleed.
These words cost two hours less than a night -
Mixed feelings are harder to rhyme than small talk.
Two hours more, and the things will go right
As long as I fail my deceiving the clock. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 2 [informant] => April90 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Invisible Scars

Contributed by April90 on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 03:58:48 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

The poison of spring has dissolved in my veins;
A second is worth both my future and past.
The more I denied my becoming insane,
The sooner insanity touched me at last.
The silence we hear is the laugh of my fate,
The soundless laugh at the one I forgot -
The yesterday's me - and the force to create
The life I portrayed. But it's less than I've got.
I love the invisible scars of my skin -
The blades of your hands are so tempting, indeed.
These words I give birth to just come from within,
Revealing the truth till the scars start to bleed.
These words cost two hours less than a night -
Mixed feelings are harder to rhyme than small talk.
Two hours more, and the things will go right
As long as I fail my deceiving the clock.

Copyright © April90 ... [ 2009-05-23 03:58:48]
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Re: Invisible Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 09:44:39 AM AEST
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Deeply moving and profound. I love the line

"The blades of your hands are so tempting, indeed."

Wow, WHAT A LINE! That was magnificent. There is more passion in
that one line than in some whole poems I've read. Excellent post!

~ Breezy

Re: Invisible Scars (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 10:05:13 AM AEST
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scars can always heal. don`t take it to your mind. speak it. Mind is the magician. read my poems and you will find it

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