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[aid] => mick
[title] => Fool on a Muse
[time] => 2009-05-23 00:51:58
[hometext] => This is not actually a poem, rather lyrics for a song. Regardless, I'm posting all my lyrics here because I'd appreciate some feedback. I feel some of it is very cliche, and I hate that. Please let me know if you feel the same way.
[bodytext] => Email me if you would like to hear the completed song. When the chains are set down, To a floor board of glass – The mind on a mound, A pulsating mass. Pull away the layers. Don’t look just to see. Feel with your heart, Then only will it be. The return to solidarity, Burdened by absurdity. Never free from mental slavery, Sorrow in loss of singularity. But then the chains are set down And the cold begins to pass. The mind on the ground, No longer makes its trespass. A fool on the muse, At the whim of his views, The green of the trees, The ravenous, careening breeze. Light through the snowfall, His nerves are enthralled. The scent of the flower, His heart does devour. The ridges of his fingertips, Remember the feel of bliss. Nerves now electric, How could he have forgotten this? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 13 [informant] => user5684 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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