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[sid] => 150091
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Fell Into Abyss
[time] => 2009-05-23 00:37:42
[hometext] => This is not actually a poem, rather lyrics for a song. Regardless, I'm posting all my lyrics here because I'd appreciate some feedback. I feel some of it is very cliche, and I hate that. Please let me know if you feel the same way.
[bodytext] => Email me if you would like to hear it recorded with the music. Fell into abyss looking for a spire looking for a glimpse of something something to take me higher. Embracing the darkness, Let it shield my eyes, Shield my eyes To keep me, keep me from the harsh. To save me, save me from the stark To hide me, hide me in the dark,. Come n’ find me, I’m falling, I’m falling . please find me, I thought I was flying come n’ find me, I’m tryin, I’m tryin please find me, I’m falling. , I’m falling. Hope, abandoned Still tryin to climb the tower Still looking for that glimpse of something. nothing ever takes me higher. I cast myself to fire ruled by the same desire take me higher, higher. Come n’ find me, I m falling, I’m falling . please find me, I thought I was flying come n’ find me, I’m tryin, I’m tryin please find me, I’m falling. , I’m falling. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 13 [informant] => user5684 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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