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Array ( [sid] => 150087 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => testament to a prodigic ending [time] => 2009-05-22 20:07:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => my deathbed, flaming. . . burns

with each apparent lapse of consciousness

a melodic happenstance of sparks

& the spittle of melting

dripping colour

mediate the paradox

that is existence

tracery. . .

a mind-set vanishing

lost & incapable smoke

offering the fading image

of some textured

lung-thing

choking

coughing

spuing creature

oh, brilliant cruelty

. . . must I be free? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 300 [topic] => 38 [informant] => elle [notes] => Edited per request in Poem Edit and Deletion Requests Moderator_18 September 3, 2009 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )

testament to a prodigic ending

Contributed by elle on Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 08:07:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Tributes

my deathbed, flaming. . . burns

with each apparent lapse of consciousness

a melodic happenstance of sparks

& the spittle of melting

dripping colour

mediate the paradox

that is existence

tracery. . .

a mind-set vanishing

lost & incapable smoke

offering the fading image

of some textured

lung-thing

choking

coughing

spuing creature

oh, brilliant cruelty

. . . must I be free?

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-05-22 20:07:05]
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Re: testament to a prodigic ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 22nd May 2009 @ 09:12:27 PM AEST
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Morbid and scary with great imagery. This provoked a lot of thought in me ol' brain which also scares me...death...frightening.

As always, another great write from the mind of to the pen of Elle.

Re: testament to a prodigic ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 23rd May 2009 @ 10:03:58 AM AEST
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oh elle, this was dark and ripe with passion! Such a glorious write, even
with all it's tragedy. You know, this moved me into believing birth may
be like this. CRASHING into reality. The death of life in the womb and the
beginning of life on Earth. This literally gave me shivers. EXCEPTIONAL writing
hun. You are truly gifted.

~ Breezy

Re: testament to a prodigic ending (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 25th May 2009 @ 02:24:19 AM AEST
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Wow..very dark yet it is great..very artistic..
Dear elle, I have many words in my mind but..
I can't express..I am here to share your feelings. Just lay your head on my shoulder..
..venkat

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