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Array ( [sid] => 150043 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time Doesnt Want You To Be Thine [time] => 2009-05-20 20:00:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A special girl is what i need
One that will always succeed
I need a girl i can call mine
but only one i see should be thine

Why was the last one not so true
for three years she was all i knew
I was unhappy so i am glad
when she cheated and made me cad

For now i know she was not as fine
as the love i see now that i wish was thine
i prayed to the heavens above
they did not answer in the way i would love

she is now with another who's true
but not one who's heart beats in hue
for the one who's eyes glows a gorgeous blue
i just want to say i truly love you i do
I only wanted to see a sign
to find out if i was to be your thine

it seems as though i may never know
if she felt this unbelievable woe

i leave for college at the end of this year
for how i long she would only be near
i wish i could go far back in time
just to see if i could make her thine [comments] => 0 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => pbrindle91 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Time Doesnt Want You To Be Thine

Contributed by pbrindle91 on Wednesday, 20th May 2009 @ 08:00:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

A special girl is what i need
One that will always succeed
I need a girl i can call mine
but only one i see should be thine

Why was the last one not so true
for three years she was all i knew
I was unhappy so i am glad
when she cheated and made me cad

For now i know she was not as fine
as the love i see now that i wish was thine
i prayed to the heavens above
they did not answer in the way i would love

she is now with another who's true
but not one who's heart beats in hue
for the one who's eyes glows a gorgeous blue
i just want to say i truly love you i do
I only wanted to see a sign
to find out if i was to be your thine

it seems as though i may never know
if she felt this unbelievable woe

i leave for college at the end of this year
for how i long she would only be near
i wish i could go far back in time
just to see if i could make her thine

Copyright © pbrindle91 ... [ 2009-05-20 20:00:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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