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Array ( [sid] => 14991 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => From The Inside [time] => 2003-03-27 04:05:00 [hometext] => For Dean [bodytext] => Make me into what you want me to be
Teach me to tell you what I feel
Wake me into submission
I will be everything you need
I give all of myself to you
Open me up from the inside
And make it more beautiful

You feed me pleasure I never imagined
Feel your hands upon my skin
Touching my soul with every breath
You're the space between my heartbeats
Waves of ecstasy rolling
Over me, through me, becoming me
Giving me more to hold onto

What you see through your eyes is not what I see
Does my love have a hold on you?
You're slowly breaking me down
Into all the little pieces
Things I never thought I would be
Waking me up from the inside
Getting to my heart and I feel it

I'm just a little girl who wears a mask
I don't see a pretty face
There's something wrong with everything
I'll never like what I see
I hate that girl in the mirror
All my love is on the inside
It's for you and that makes it beautiful [comments] => 5 [counter] => 258 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
From The Inside

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Make me into what you want me to be
Teach me to tell you what I feel
Wake me into submission
I will be everything you need
I give all of myself to you
Open me up from the inside
And make it more beautiful

You feed me pleasure I never imagined
Feel your hands upon my skin
Touching my soul with every breath
You're the space between my heartbeats
Waves of ecstasy rolling
Over me, through me, becoming me
Giving me more to hold onto

What you see through your eyes is not what I see
Does my love have a hold on you?
You're slowly breaking me down
Into all the little pieces
Things I never thought I would be
Waking me up from the inside
Getting to my heart and I feel it

I'm just a little girl who wears a mask
I don't see a pretty face
There's something wrong with everything
I'll never like what I see
I hate that girl in the mirror
All my love is on the inside
It's for you and that makes it beautiful




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-03-27 04:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: From The Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:14:18 AM AEST
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I really loved the way you wrote this poem ... "from the inside" - I'm jealous :))) .. this is how I see love too, and you wrote it so beautifully ... one of the nicest writes of yours I've read so far ... Jan


Re: From The Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 09:22:01 AM AEST
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internal beauty if the most important..it is good that love has set this free in you..very good write.

Sharon


Re: From The Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 11:39:28 AM AEST
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beautiful - such a truthful, heartfelt write. like Plato said 'the mind is unperishable' - our physical selves are passing, its our hearts, minds and souls that make us who we are. excellent write, keep them coming, Kate x


Re: From The Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 12:05:19 PM AEST
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this is truely beautiful and thoughtful. excellent write from the heart.


Re: From The Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 08:05:20 PM AEST
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Wow... dude. Love it!

Always,
Em.




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