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[sid] => 14977
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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Emotions
[time] => 2003-03-26 23:25:00
[hometext] => please read and comment on this poem and all my other ones please thankyou. Also some of my words may not be spelled right just do the best you can to understand them if they are spelld wrong
[bodytext] => When you look at me what do you see
A quiet shy little girl or a frustraded mad teen
Whatever you wish to see please don't let my terrible looks decieve you
Don't let my quietage make you nervous, don't let my madness make you cry
I am only human in minds eye
Just like you so don't laugh or stare because one day it could be you standing here
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 346
[topic] => 30
[informant] => knowWhat_kind
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[alanguage] => english
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[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
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[topicname] => PoemsonBeauty
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Emotions
Contributed by
knowWhat_kind
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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When you look at me what do you see
A quiet shy little girl or a frustraded mad teen
Whatever you wish to see please don't let my terrible looks decieve you
Don't let my quietage make you nervous, don't let my madness make you cry
I am only human in minds eye
Just like you so don't laugh or stare because one day it could be you standing here
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Re: Emotions
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by TundraHydra on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:11:50 AM AEST
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| this is so true and never let yourself believe that you look "terrible" Great write |
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Re: Emotions
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by Varro on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:44:04 AM AEST
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I see you to be sensitive and emotionally vulnerable. But sweet nonetheless. Nice write.
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Re: Emotions
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:11:26 AM AEST
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| good one |
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Re: Emotions
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:48:31 PM AEST
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| i like how you wrote this, your seeing the ones looking at you and getting in their head, yet asking them to concider being in your shoes, well done:) |
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Re: Emotions
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by PhantomsLDY on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:54:46 PM AEST
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| This is beautifully written you have put into words what so many like you wish to be heard. |
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Re: Emotions
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 02:10:47 AM AEST
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| Sounds like there's an inspirational message you're sharing. Good, good. |
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Re: Emotions
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by Percursors on
Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 10:59:45 AM AEST
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| I loved this poem! I feel like that so often I can’t count. Good write! |
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Re: Emotions
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 29th April 2003 @ 10:32:24 PM AEST
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| I like this and I think everyone is terrible inside and out. I mean peoples can get bad at times but everyone is good outside and in. I think that people make their stelf like that. |
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Re: Emotions
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 29th July 2003 @ 01:16:22 AM AEST
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This is a good poem. Well worded.
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