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Array ( [sid] => 14976 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Waiting for Love [time] => 2003-03-26 23:05:00 [hometext] => Um I really don't know what to write about this poem. Some people might not like what I write and hey thats totally cool cause I know I am not the best writer in the world, but if you people could and would kindly read my poetry and comment about it that would be really cool cause i like to see what you other fine poets think about my stuff. Well thankyou i bid you all a farewell goodbye [bodytext] => Waiting siting in the dark for the one I love
You left that dark cold winters night
Now my soul withers away
My heart broken wondering are you coming back
Our past like a ghost haunts me for I cry all night wanting you back home
Are you coming...do you even here me
Where are you now...I ponder and waste my days away on you
I lay in my bed hoping, crying, screaming please come back for I love thee [comments] => 6 [counter] => 393 [topic] => 22 [informant] => knowWhat_kind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Waiting for Love

Contributed by knowWhat_kind on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Waiting siting in the dark for the one I love
You left that dark cold winters night
Now my soul withers away
My heart broken wondering are you coming back
Our past like a ghost haunts me for I cry all night wanting you back home
Are you coming...do you even here me
Where are you now...I ponder and waste my days away on you
I lay in my bed hoping, crying, screaming please come back for I love thee




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Re: Waiting for Love (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:14:24 AM AEST
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This one actually made me cry. Not to be sarcastic or anything. Another awsome write.


Re: Waiting for Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Varro on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:49:38 AM AEST
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Well done. It shows raw emotion and vivid imagery..'waiting in the dark' evokes a near explosive soul just waiting to burst out. A desparation is seen here, someone who needs love despartely. At least that's my interpretation. You write with great passion and emotion. Love it!
Varro


Re: Waiting for Love (User Rating: 1 )
by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 02:12:46 AM AEST
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nice write


Re: Waiting for Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 05:12:13 AM AEST
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its all right.. venkat


Re: Waiting for Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 08:04:24 AM AEST
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I thought this was awesome. I really liked it. You are a fine writer.

sleepless_siren


Re: Waiting for Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 11:08:37 AM AEST
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This is another really good write. Just by reading “Well thank you I bid you all a farewell goodbye” I can tell that you are a very honest person and have no troubles writing your raw emotions down with pen to page techniques. Away I love this poem. GREAT WRITE!!!




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