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Array ( [sid] => 149718 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye [time] => 2009-05-07 10:21:44 [hometext] => One I wrote about 4 years ago, 15 years old when I was going through my 'the world is against me' phase and a bit depressed. [bodytext] => No one knows me
and no one cares
No one likes me
everyone stares

Im all alone
always have been
inside this dome
'till Im eighteen

When its legal
I'll fly away
like an eagle
without delay

I am hated
by everyone
and Ive waited
for any one
to be my friend
these times are hard
I need to mend
my broken heart....

Ive felt like this
for too long now
Nothing to miss
found a way out

Ive thought it through
Its all been planned
that one day soon
I'll leave the land

Im sorry mum
Im sorry dad
what Ive become
it makes you mad

Im not pretty
and Im boring
I am faulty
and not deserving

and to you I write
I took some pills
To put this right
I heard it kills

you know I loved you
but me you taunted....
you to love me too
Was all I needed

No one knew me
No one cared
No one liked me
everyone stared

This is my death
It's not a lie
with this last breath
I'll say,

goodbye [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 36 [informant] => MissAnnonymous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Goodbye

Contributed by MissAnnonymous on Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 10:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



No one knows me
and no one cares
No one likes me
everyone stares

Im all alone
always have been
inside this dome
'till Im eighteen

When its legal
I'll fly away
like an eagle
without delay

I am hated
by everyone
and Ive waited
for any one
to be my friend
these times are hard
I need to mend
my broken heart....

Ive felt like this
for too long now
Nothing to miss
found a way out

Ive thought it through
Its all been planned
that one day soon
I'll leave the land

Im sorry mum
Im sorry dad
what Ive become
it makes you mad

Im not pretty
and Im boring
I am faulty
and not deserving

and to you I write
I took some pills
To put this right
I heard it kills

you know I loved you
but me you taunted....
you to love me too
Was all I needed

No one knew me
No one cared
No one liked me
everyone stared

This is my death
It's not a lie
with this last breath
I'll say,

goodbye




Copyright © MissAnnonymous ... [ 2009-05-07 10:21:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 04:56:07 PM AEST
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Nicely written... I think that many of us would be able to relate to this....
Jenni




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