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Array ( [sid] => 149715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In sleep [time] => 2009-05-07 06:05:22 [hometext] => Not my usual subject, but a change of pace is great dont you think!!! hope you like this journey!!!! [bodytext] => In sleep, in sleep, I wander deep,
Into minds un-ego’ed keep,
And swim in thoughts
And swim in dark,
To where all source of thoughts embark,

In sleep, in dreams, I saunter slow,
To where all conscious things must go,
And ramble on
And tumble down
And aim for something bright below,

I turn, I flow, through golden veins,
Connected to all other brains,
With every move
I touch the great,
The one connected living state,

In here, this here, I feel at peace,
As though all forms of doubting cease,
And this is me,
The brightest me,
The central source indefinitely,
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In sleep

Contributed by zenith66 on Thursday, 7th May 2009 @ 06:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

In sleep, in sleep, I wander deep,
Into minds un-ego’ed keep,
And swim in thoughts
And swim in dark,
To where all source of thoughts embark,

In sleep, in dreams, I saunter slow,
To where all conscious things must go,
And ramble on
And tumble down
And aim for something bright below,

I turn, I flow, through golden veins,
Connected to all other brains,
With every move
I touch the great,
The one connected living state,

In here, this here, I feel at peace,
As though all forms of doubting cease,
And this is me,
The brightest me,
The central source indefinitely,

Copyright Â© zenith66 ... [ 2009-05-07 06:05:22]
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Re: In sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by EmilyMichaela on Sunday, 10th May 2009 @ 05:59:12 PM AEST
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Unbelievable. I was talking when I began to read this but I had to shut up as soon as I started I'm literaly speechless. You've taken dreaming and REALLY made a poem about it...awesome

Re: In sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th August 2009 @ 08:58:22 PM AEST
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zenith this was S P E C T A C U L A R !!!!!

I'm so sorry I didn't come here sooner, but so glad that I did tonight. This is so weird because just
yesterday I wrote a piece entitled, "Sleep On". And now I come here to find this masterful work. I so
love the whole of this but verse four really struck a chord with me. And the second line of the first stanza..

"Into minds un-ego'ed keep"

BRILLIANT!! I'm so entirely jealous of that one line. It says SO much. You always do impress, but this was
so fantastical, I can't even formulate the words to properly administer the credit. Just know you have now
and always, my undying admiration, poet. Thank you for sharing.

~ Breezy

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