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and once again we are one
just try to see what i feel
and everything to you will be so real
touch me.. all my wounds will soon heal
and today i`m born
torn after i was born
the land of poetry is a shelter
the land of poetry
where misery and pain
are the only source of rain
rain that keeps the soil fertile
bringing everyday words and resurrecting souls..

in this land our sorrows are the only heroes

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nirvana..

Contributed by wazarov on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

the light is off
and once again we are one
just try to see what i feel
and everything to you will be so real
touch me.. all my wounds will soon heal
and today i`m born
torn after i was born
the land of poetry is a shelter
the land of poetry
where misery and pain
are the only source of rain
rain that keeps the soil fertile
bringing everyday words and resurrecting souls..

in this land our sorrows are the only heroes

Copyright © wazarov ... [ 2003-03-26 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by kels497 on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:41:34 PM AEST
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i like this poem, it had a nice flow to it.

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:54:09 PM AEST
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good write
Sharon

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:50:13 PM AEST
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A lovely write. May you remain in this land always...

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by knowWhat_kind on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 10:44:20 PM AEST
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good write,
Sarah

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by flirtyrockstar on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 02:13:00 AM AEST
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I really like this poem, it's very original and the last line is excellent.

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 04:28:55 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem, i totally related to it

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:09:04 PM AEST
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oh my God...wow...I loved this...great write...

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 09:04:48 PM AEST
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Lovely one, Dean....
"the land of poetry is a shelter".... and a shield... so true...
Jenni

Re: nirvana.. (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 11:52:55 PM AEST
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very nicely done, i very much enjoyed it

Lindsey

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