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Array ( [sid] => 149582 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stay Gone [time] => 2009-05-02 08:27:20 [hometext] => i wrote this, and then thought about not posting it... well, here it is anyway. [bodytext] => ________________________

You ran away; sofarsofast, stillgone.
They chased you, scared you to never come back
I swore it was a nightmare, but with dawn -
Day breaks, and I have yet to see your face.

I ran you away; for all that you lack.
With me you tried, but could never keep pace
I gave you no option, sent you to pack -
I won't ever settle for boyslikeyou.

I ran away; like I'd run a race.
Barely even spared the breath to say adieu,
I couldn't take many more days inthatplace -
I may feel remorse but never regret.

You aren't coming back; can'ttakeit -
Stay Gone.
I'll nevergoback; I'll always be -
Gone. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => anomalei [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Stay Gone

Contributed by anomalei on Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 08:27:20 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

________________________

You ran away; sofarsofast, stillgone.
They chased you, scared you to never come back
I swore it was a nightmare, but with dawn -
Day breaks, and I have yet to see your face.

I ran you away; for all that you lack.
With me you tried, but could never keep pace
I gave you no option, sent you to pack -
I won't ever settle for boyslikeyou.

I ran away; like I'd run a race.
Barely even spared the breath to say adieu,
I couldn't take many more days inthatplace -
I may feel remorse but never regret.

You aren't coming back; can'ttakeit -
Stay Gone.
I'll nevergoback; I'll always be -
Gone.

Copyright © anomalei ... [ 2009-05-02 08:27:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Stay Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 12:18:33 PM AEST
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this is very impressive. it's unique and creative and has a lovely flow to it. good work.

-Phil

Re: Stay Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by simsalabim on Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 10:56:44 PM AEST
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that was so cute....not obnoxious or unprovoked at all....

::snicker::

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