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[aid] => mick
[title] => Always Winter in my Head
[time] => 2009-04-30 20:07:20
[hometext] => hey this is like the first real poem i've ever written so um... constructive criticism would be nice. if it's not good, just let me know or give me tips cause i'm just trying it out. also.. i can't find a title for it so um.. help please! =]
[bodytext] => Standing on this empty street Drowning under all the sleet I feel the cold touch to my veins Bringing to surface all of the pains Sinking down beneath the earth Life delivers what it's worth In the dead of winter I try to find A ray of sunshine in my mind I've never felt so cold and alone This emptiness has overflown Nothing remains but sadness and fear Trying to fight back all of the tears . . . and yet, In the midst of my darkest hour When sweet thoughts I once had have long since turned sour, You bring to me a sense of hope That begins to shine through my pain As spring approaches and the pouring rain Flower buds begin to bloom My heart's song sings through the darkness and gloom Falling fast, time goes past And I stay on my cloud in the sky Blissfully unaware of the change that awaits As spring turns to summer, My heart and mind are full Of thoughts of you and me And I think to my myself "Maybe he can set me free" But something feels wrong No longer is the song My heart sings completely happy What was once a peaceful lullaby Begins to change Like the setting sun in a clear blue sky Summer drifts into fall I feel myself again building this wall How can I ever let you in When doing so feels like a sin I don't deserve your loving arms Your beautiful eyes, your gifts and charm The fire that once burned between us Settles into a glowing cinder And the cold returns to my heart As cold does every winter And so the cycle continues, Each time leaving a deeper wound in my heart All I want is for you to love me Because without you, My heart will remain frozen in the dead of winter Just knowing you care Allows my heart to keep fighting the long, cold winter Your fleeting smile and kindest touch Guide me toward the warmth I long to hold. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => anonymous2112 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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