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Fuelling this rush like adrenalin
Aiding all the corruption
A personal cheer team for destruction
But the colours seep through
And the tune changes
The playlist rolls through my life
Editing what it wants
Pulling on the strings
The spinning makes me dizzy
The loss of control
Evoking the harshest chord
The chord of maniacal enjoyment
The audience stares
Injured in the chaos
The deafening soundtrack
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The Deafening Soundtrack

Contributed by guiltycircles on Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 03:59:21 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

The notes pulse through my veins
Fuelling this rush like adrenalin
Aiding all the corruption
A personal cheer team for destruction
But the colours seep through
And the tune changes
The playlist rolls through my life
Editing what it wants
Pulling on the strings
The spinning makes me dizzy
The loss of control
Evoking the harshest chord
The chord of maniacal enjoyment
The audience stares
Injured in the chaos
The deafening soundtrack

Copyright © guiltycircles ... [ 2009-04-30 15:59:21]
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Re: The Deafening Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_blue on Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 04:56:44 PM AEST
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I love the musical analogies, being a musician myself. Very colorful and expressive, it actually sounds like a song. Great write!

Re: The Deafening Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by anonymous2112 on Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 08:24:47 PM AEST
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I agree with the first commentor; I am also a musician, and I loved the way it flows. It really does sound like it could be turned into a song =]

Re: The Deafening Soundtrack (User Rating: 1 )
by Secretpoet on Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 08:47:02 AM AEST
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Really liked this, real sense of purpose in there, like its moving along and its making you read, good stuff.

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