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Array ( [sid] => 149538 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shipwrecked [time] => 2009-04-30 12:01:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As we sail across the ocean
In the year, seventeen ninety nine
Cosy in our hammocks
Lookout on duty, weather is fine

Then the storm befell us
On that darkened night
In gale force winds
For survival, we fight

Wooden hull creaking
In forty foot swell
How can we endure
This living hell

The mast, now splintered
Sails, now ragged shreds
Cries of mariners
Aroused, from their beds

Man overboard
A shipmate falls
In darkness unseen
For help. he calls

Battered, pounded
Gale force winds lash
Blown toward land
Into rocks, we smash

Our vessel now wrecked
The Captain roars
Man the lifeboats
Break out the oars

Ship sinking, in the distance
To ocean bed below
Faces, etched in pain
Weakened arms row

In the cold, of the ocean
Cries, of men in pain
Lost, to depths below
Never, to be seen again

Our tiny lifeboat reaches shore
Men tired, wet and cold
Unknown what lays ahead of us
What will this island hold

How will they find us
Will they look
Or will we become
Another story in a book
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 8 [informant] => thewizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )
Shipwrecked

Contributed by thewizard on Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 12:01:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy



As we sail across the ocean
In the year, seventeen ninety nine
Cosy in our hammocks
Lookout on duty, weather is fine

Then the storm befell us
On that darkened night
In gale force winds
For survival, we fight

Wooden hull creaking
In forty foot swell
How can we endure
This living hell

The mast, now splintered
Sails, now ragged shreds
Cries of mariners
Aroused, from their beds

Man overboard
A shipmate falls
In darkness unseen
For help. he calls

Battered, pounded
Gale force winds lash
Blown toward land
Into rocks, we smash

Our vessel now wrecked
The Captain roars
Man the lifeboats
Break out the oars

Ship sinking, in the distance
To ocean bed below
Faces, etched in pain
Weakened arms row

In the cold, of the ocean
Cries, of men in pain
Lost, to depths below
Never, to be seen again

Our tiny lifeboat reaches shore
Men tired, wet and cold
Unknown what lays ahead of us
What will this island hold

How will they find us
Will they look
Or will we become
Another story in a book




Copyright © thewizard ... [ 2009-04-30 12:01:03]
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Re: Shipwrecked (User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 02:10:05 PM AEST
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BRILLIANT!!!!!!

1000 OUT OF 5!!!!!!

That is a storm that I would love to see!!!


Re: Shipwrecked (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 30th April 2009 @ 04:15:27 PM AEST
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What a truly wonderful tale, Paul.... Enjoyed it immensely. Great visuals....
Jenni




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