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Array ( [sid] => 149512 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In Tune with the Unverse [time] => 2009-04-29 14:12:18 [hometext] => A new muse for me but I'm willing to try anything new [bodytext] => My minds in line with the eclipse of the moon
Alignment of the stars
I draw strength from mercury and mars
I'm in tune with the universe
It's the best just going with the flow
And all you have to do is know
You just go with the flow
My minds in tune with the moon
My hearts aligned with the stars
My body draws strength from mercury and mars
I forget everything that made my life worse
Because I'm in tune with the universe
Going with the natural flow of things
Just standing back and absorbing it all
Taking from the moon and the stars
From mercury and mars
I feel the best I have in my life

And all I had to do is stop trying my best
Let my mind rest
Forget bad and worse
And become one, become in tune with the universe
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In Tune with the Unverse

Contributed by Voice of the Silent on Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 02:12:18 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

My minds in line with the eclipse of the moon
Alignment of the stars
I draw strength from mercury and mars
I'm in tune with the universe
It's the best just going with the flow
And all you have to do is know
You just go with the flow
My minds in tune with the moon
My hearts aligned with the stars
My body draws strength from mercury and mars
I forget everything that made my life worse
Because I'm in tune with the universe
Going with the natural flow of things
Just standing back and absorbing it all
Taking from the moon and the stars
From mercury and mars
I feel the best I have in my life

And all I had to do is stop trying my best
Let my mind rest
Forget bad and worse
And become one, become in tune with the universe

Copyright © Voice of the Silent ... [ 2009-04-29 14:12:18]
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Re: In Tune with the Unverse (User Rating: 1 )
by RyhmeNotReason on Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 02:52:57 PM AEST
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very nice write kelly... serene and calming... i like it. Keep em coming.

Re: In Tune with the Unverse (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 04:00:40 PM AEST
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I've always believe that what you truly desire and deserve from life, the Universe will provide for you.
I think here you have said what I feel.
Well done

Steve

Re: In Tune with the Unverse (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 29th April 2009 @ 04:33:38 PM AEST
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You captured a high energy vibe in this write.
I thank you for sharing this.
Good work and thought.

Hugs
Michelle

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