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[aid] => mick
[title] => None
[time] => 2009-04-29 01:32:25
[hometext] => Not my best as far as i can tell, but what matters is the message right? And I can't seem to title my poems. I feel like it'd just kill the whole thing if i don't find the right one, you know?
[bodytext] => The normality of society. What a dreadful thing. I liked it better when to you there was no such thing. So kind and sweet, so innocent. Now bold and daring, so energetic. Now nothing makes sense. The flocks surround you, so many about. But i wonder what's happened, haven't found the right trout? Just the last piece missing: To go out and about. Go on and be normal, cuz you're missing out. The cluelessness has long been gone, so why don't you make your own kind of dawn. It'd really help, both you and i. In different ways of course, just leave it at that. At this point i know that i can never let go, but that should not stop you, but then again i don't think it would. It's something so natural, but something ain't right. You were never like this, admiring the likes. I know i had it coming, but i don't like this new drawing. Don't like it at all. It's not the same lisa, not similar at all. The beautiful simplicity, society has stripped you of that. Long live the painting forever in my memory. Damn you society. Why why why... [comments] => 0 [counter] => 142 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Norb-E [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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