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Array ( [sid] => 149456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => liberation [time] => 2009-04-27 19:26:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => outside the limits

of time & space

a shield is cast, aboard.

rescinding plats

of counterfitted weight

unbalanced, taunt

agape in aftermath. . .

respite. . . corrosion

but as seeds scatter

dust. . . of principalities

looming. . . lost upon the air.

no sound

no friction

no doubt

no matter

the bow is stealth

harp string. . . strung bare.

the quiver, donates.

the prize

always

that cleverness

does not strike

& so, outwits the snare. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 49 [informant] => elle [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => mystical )

liberation

Contributed by elle on Monday, 27th April 2009 @ 07:26:57 PM in AEST
Topic: mystical

outside the limits

of time & space

a shield is cast, aboard.

rescinding plats

of counterfitted weight

unbalanced, taunt

agape in aftermath. . .

respite. . . corrosion

but as seeds scatter

dust. . . of principalities

looming. . . lost upon the air.

no sound

no friction

no doubt

no matter

the bow is stealth

harp string. . . strung bare.

the quiver, donates.

the prize

always

that cleverness

does not strike

& so, outwits the snare.

Copyright © elle ... [ 2009-04-27 19:26:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: liberation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 06:58:20 AM AEST
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Enjoyed this well done presentation of seriously tight thought-provocation. I love it when cleverness gits beat. Lifts my heart!

wabl
KenMoore
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Re: liberation (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 28th April 2009 @ 01:36:34 PM AEST
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I mirror Ken here,

harp string, strung bare, the quiver, donates

that in itself is so super.

Michelle

Re: liberation (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 09:23:12 AM AEST
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However the snare can strike and keep quite the beat. Cleverness, startled, yipes out "Who ha, wha was that?!" Snare snickers and runs leaving cleverness behind coughing in dust.

Take care,

Sonorman
:-)

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