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Array ( [sid] => 149375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Affection [time] => 2009-04-24 17:14:37 [hometext] => This is about the search for love [bodytext] => You
Without even trying have
Managed to shape my emotions into your own ideal image
My skin gains color with just the the utterance of your name
You give me satisfaction
Otherwise unattainable without you
I try to recipricate
But my love will never amount to the same you give me
You dont mind
you always hold me dear
I'll always appriciate your love with my utmost ability
.............But I can't understand your love because im still searching for you [comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Your Affection

Contributed by wood on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 05:14:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You
Without even trying have
Managed to shape my emotions into your own ideal image
My skin gains color with just the the utterance of your name
You give me satisfaction
Otherwise unattainable without you
I try to recipricate
But my love will never amount to the same you give me
You dont mind
you always hold me dear
I'll always appriciate your love with my utmost ability
.............But I can't understand your love because im still searching for you

Copyright © wood ... [ 2009-04-24 17:14:37]
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Re: Your Affection (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 13th October 2009 @ 09:39:28 PM AEST
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Okay, not to beat a dead horse, cause flies may get all aggravated, try a spell check and be consistent, even if the misspellings are intentional. For example, can't used correctly, don't isn't (is not). If you really have no problem with it, just be consistent with your style. If you think it's a good thing, then why change a good thing? If you think it's broken, then by all means, fix it.

It's actually spelled reciprocating. A good website to use, because it recognizes phonetic spelling attempts/searches is Merriam-Webster Online Dictionary. http://www.m-w.com/home.htm while it does not always recognize what you're trying to get at, it is pretty good at it.

Again, remember these are all just my own personal preferences. I simply think taking the extra time to check spelling and grammar before putting something out there for all the world to see shows pride in your work. After all www equates to world wide web.

Also, if you are really serious about it, I suggest taking poetry courses because there are no professionals and no experts here. They may think they are but if they are, then why are they writing for an amateur poetry site?

But the poem has very nice contemplations and ponderings. So don't get me wrong, I liked it. Okay?

Lastly, a question.

What's up with the ............................... ?

Anyway, I say keep up the good work. You'll only get better.

Take care and keep at it!!!!!

Tim
cool dude

cool dude

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