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I Can't Do This Alone
Contributed by
sand_paper_tears
on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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hold me forever
please, don't let go
i need you too badly
to do this alone
kisses and hugs
and nothing more
are enough to keep me
from ever walking out the door
i'll cherish your words,
support all your wishes,
and try hard to pretend
that nothing is missing
touch me and whisper
comforting things in my ear
i promise you i'll believe
whatever i hear
lies are enough to keep me
in your arms secure
because my confidence is becoming
quickly obscure
so pretend with me
forever or never
that this is real
that this is true
try to ignore what it might actually do
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sand_paper_tears
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2003-03-26 11:45:00]
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Re: I Can't Do This Alone
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by M on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:48:04 AM AEST
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| I want to say 'wow', but i don't think it's the right word. this poem, i'm glad you wrote it in the end, it is so sad, so emotional. I love this write. xXx |
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Re: I Can't Do This Alone
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:37:45 PM AEST
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very good write
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Re: I Can't Do This Alone
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 04:24:59 AM AEST
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I can relate. I have felt like this. When one of my ex's told me that he didn't love me anymore I asked him if there was anything I could do to change his mind. Looking back on it it seems like such a stupid question becuase you can't make someone love you but it was so hard to hear.
Great poem, I am glad you shared it with us.
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