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Array ( [sid] => 149361 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm not good enough [time] => 2009-04-24 11:12:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => They’re oblivious to your perfection,
they can’t see your forever shining light
That velvety soft and loving soul of yours,
it has inspired this poem tonight

Forever a friend you’ll have in me,
if we say goodbye or grow apart
I’ll carry a piece of you with me,
hold it inside my learning heart

If you forget my name someday,
if you forget the person you knew
Know that you began my new journey,
making me unable to ever forget you

Angel like and uncorrupted,
Your wings so white and pure
Someday you’ll find someone like you,
You’ll find someone better, I’m sure [comments] => 4 [counter] => 363 [topic] => 43 [informant] => bluethewolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

I'm not good enough

Contributed by bluethewolf on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 11:12:22 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

They’re oblivious to your perfection,
they can’t see your forever shining light
That velvety soft and loving soul of yours,
it has inspired this poem tonight

Forever a friend you’ll have in me,
if we say goodbye or grow apart
I’ll carry a piece of you with me,
hold it inside my learning heart

If you forget my name someday,
if you forget the person you knew
Know that you began my new journey,
making me unable to ever forget you

Angel like and uncorrupted,
Your wings so white and pure
Someday you’ll find someone like you,
You’ll find someone better, I’m sure

Copyright Â© bluethewolf ... [ 2009-04-24 11:12:22]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I'm not good enough (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 12:28:30 PM AEST
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omg this reminds me of 'Better Than Me' by Hinder. the lyrics are very similiar. i love that song and this poem!

Re: I'm not good enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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Very lovely, filled with tender sentiment.

Re: I'm not good enough (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarzie on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 03:49:39 PM AEST
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I feel many people can relate to this, including myself. You seem to hold this person in high regard. Great poem :)

Re: I'm not good enough (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 09:20:00 PM AEST
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A pretty write,
it has a sweet warm quality to it.

Sorry about the pm yesterday computer was on I wasn't with it when you sent the pm....

Was I mad? No not when picture was taken.... if that is what you were referring to lol.

Was I ***** off yesterday? OH YES VERY LOL

Michelle

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