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Array ( [sid] => 149337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => trapped [time] => 2009-04-23 16:03:12 [hometext] => im a hermit and i don't like it [bodytext] => Trapped under cold rocks beneath the sun, digging to get out, starved for fun
Open my eyes beneath the ground, dirt in my eyes, no one around
By trusting in my ability, I lost my sense of responsibility
by forgetting my world and friends, makes it feel like the end
Struggle and squirm, wriggling in the mud like a drying up worm
I want to yell but my voice wont escape the night
I want some help, but I lost the will to fight [comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 21 [informant] => mutantfish [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

trapped

Contributed by mutantfish on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 04:03:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Trapped under cold rocks beneath the sun, digging to get out, starved for fun
Open my eyes beneath the ground, dirt in my eyes, no one around
By trusting in my ability, I lost my sense of responsibility
by forgetting my world and friends, makes it feel like the end
Struggle and squirm, wriggling in the mud like a drying up worm
I want to yell but my voice wont escape the night
I want some help, but I lost the will to fight

Copyright © mutantfish ... [ 2009-04-23 16:03:12]
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Re: trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:35:19 PM AEST
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Your poem gave so much insight to the struggles you are going thru. May your poetry help to free you by expressing your feelings.

You did very well in your descriptions of your emotional state.

I hope it gets easier for you.

Kie

Re: trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 02:11:50 AM AEST
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Trapped under cold rocks..... Right from the very start of this poem I felt such emotion tinged with sadness.
I feel trapped right now, like I said right at the start I was caught.......

Do not lose the will to fight, it may seem it is gone but it is still there buried somewhere, reach and find it.
I hope you will be ok.

Hugs
Michelle

Re: trapped (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:27:35 AM AEST
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i know the feeling. stay strong, keep writing and you will be victorious.

-Phil

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