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Array ( [sid] => 149333 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Is True [time] => 2009-04-23 15:36:57 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I still remember when they said we wouldn't make it
That we wouldn't last more than a day
They said we weren't strong enough to make it
But is your arms is where I am today.
I recall when they waited for us to lose it
When they waited for us to fall apart
They thought they knew that we would lose it
But I am still the only one in your heart

And I can feel you within me; within my soul
When I'm with you, I know that you make me whole
And I love you so much; you don't even know
They can stand by, in shock, and watch our love continue to grow...

I still remember the first time we said "I love you"
When we made it past the six month mark
It's been almost a year now
And I can still feel that same old spark
Hold me now, while we're together
Tell me I'm the only one right for you
Whisper in my ear; tell me "forever"
Feel my body against you; know it is true. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlightKiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

It Is True

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 03:36:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I still remember when they said we wouldn't make it
That we wouldn't last more than a day
They said we weren't strong enough to make it
But is your arms is where I am today.
I recall when they waited for us to lose it
When they waited for us to fall apart
They thought they knew that we would lose it
But I am still the only one in your heart

And I can feel you within me; within my soul
When I'm with you, I know that you make me whole
And I love you so much; you don't even know
They can stand by, in shock, and watch our love continue to grow...

I still remember the first time we said "I love you"
When we made it past the six month mark
It's been almost a year now
And I can still feel that same old spark
Hold me now, while we're together
Tell me I'm the only one right for you
Whisper in my ear; tell me "forever"
Feel my body against you; know it is true.

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2009-04-23 15:36:57]
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Re: It Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by RyhmeNotReason on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 05:02:42 PM AEST
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another great one moonlightkiss... i'm starting to become a fan of your work. This one reminds me very much of when I first started dating my ex. All our friends said we were crazy and it wouldn't last a week... we were together and happy for almost 8 years before she passed.
" When I'm with you, I know that you make me whole
And I love you so much; you don't even know"
How many times I have said or thought these exact words....extaordinary poetry.

Re: It Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 04:33:18 AM AEST
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may it continue into eternity. a fine write, a beautiful story.

best wishes,
Phil

Re: It Is True (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarzie on Friday, 24th April 2009 @ 11:25:25 AM AEST
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This is a very beautiful story. You make rhyming a part of the poem without making it the focus. Keep them coming :)

Sarzie

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