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Thrice you rise, and yet again.
Once in words and twice in screams.
Thrice you shout, and fourth you leave.

Voices in the silence to quench my thirst of warmth.
Light where there was darkness to feed my will to hope.
Big when I was small to help me build some strength.
Strong when I was weak to help me stand up straight.

Your timid successions of my mind tend to liquefy my body.
I am left to almost nothing when you suddenly take your leave.
Its not that I miss you, its just nicer than the void.
I wish I was half as strong as you.
Your timid successions of my mind tend to weaken my soul.
I am left to almost nothing when your vivid tensions seize control.
Its not that I want to be you, I just don't want to be me.
I wish I could control you.
Your timid successions of my mind tend to be all that's left of me.

Screams of attention, screams to draw eyes.
Screams to approve, screams to tell lies.
Action transparent, a shallow word.
Although cheap, all I can afford.

One time laughter, second smiles.
Third time passion, fourth time lies.
One too early, two too late.
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Contributed by Rumours on Thursday, 23rd April 2009 @ 09:20:56 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Once you came, and twice you smile.
Thrice you rise, and yet again.
Once in words and twice in screams.
Thrice you shout, and fourth you leave.

Voices in the silence to quench my thirst of warmth.
Light where there was darkness to feed my will to hope.
Big when I was small to help me build some strength.
Strong when I was weak to help me stand up straight.

Your timid successions of my mind tend to liquefy my body.
I am left to almost nothing when you suddenly take your leave.
Its not that I miss you, its just nicer than the void.
I wish I was half as strong as you.
Your timid successions of my mind tend to weaken my soul.
I am left to almost nothing when your vivid tensions seize control.
Its not that I want to be you, I just don't want to be me.
I wish I could control you.
Your timid successions of my mind tend to be all that's left of me.

Screams of attention, screams to draw eyes.
Screams to approve, screams to tell lies.
Action transparent, a shallow word.
Although cheap, all I can afford.

One time laughter, second smiles.
Third time passion, fourth time lies.
One too early, two too late.
Third lie greater, fourth you fade

Copyright © Rumours ... [ 2009-04-23 09:20:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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