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Could never hurt this
Imaginary heart of mine.
Which I seem to never find,
It doesn’t included that state of mind.
I’m careless
In my awareness,
Because I’m too deep
To climb the leap
Standing before me,
Lined like hurdles
Resembling dominos,
I decline.
Instead of boring you
With this rhyme,
Let’s go deeper
Under the line.
Beneath the surface;
I believe you’ve heard this,
Into a different state of mind.
To the mentality
Of bending reality,
Might cause a fatality
Of that state of mind.
A sacrifice worthy
Of unending love;
The type you’ve only seen
Impending from above.
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Hidden In Carelessness

Contributed by 2Deep4U on Tuesday, 21st April 2009 @ 08:02:56 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A relationship without purpose
Could never hurt this
Imaginary heart of mine.
Which I seem to never find,
It doesn’t included that state of mind.
I’m careless
In my awareness,
Because I’m too deep
To climb the leap
Standing before me,
Lined like hurdles
Resembling dominos,
I decline.
Instead of boring you
With this rhyme,
Let’s go deeper
Under the line.
Beneath the surface;
I believe you’ve heard this,
Into a different state of mind.
To the mentality
Of bending reality,
Might cause a fatality
Of that state of mind.
A sacrifice worthy
Of unending love;
The type you’ve only seen
Impending from above.

Copyright Â© 2Deep4U ... [ 2009-04-21 20:02:56]
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Re: Hidden In Carelessness (User Rating: 1 )
by kye on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 05:45:50 PM AEST
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This poem has a lyrical feel to it. I think it has meaning, is from your heart and the title is perfect.

Of the three poems you have submitted this one is my favorite.

Keep writing!

Kie

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