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not too good at it
sadly staring
my patience wearing
do you see
what this does to me
do you care
in my heart a tear
drops of blood
commence this flood
of pain and sorrow
no life to borrow
i put myself here
so why do i fear
the acts of another
i should be a mother
but put in this spot
the tension burns hot
i'm sad and angry
and just maybe
i'll tired of this
and call it quits

3/20/03 [comments] => 8 [counter] => 360 [topic] => 52 [informant] => LadyDama [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

call it quits

Contributed by LadyDama on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

here i sit
not too good at it
sadly staring
my patience wearing
do you see
what this does to me
do you care
in my heart a tear
drops of blood
commence this flood
of pain and sorrow
no life to borrow
i put myself here
so why do i fear
the acts of another
i should be a mother
but put in this spot
the tension burns hot
i'm sad and angry
and just maybe
i'll tired of this
and call it quits

3/20/03

Copyright © LadyDama ... [ 2003-03-26 08:05:00]
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Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 09:18:16 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. Good work

sleepless_siren

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 11:44:01 AM AEST
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ooh...this is so sad...don't ever give up...

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:55:52 PM AEST
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well written..although so sad..may your God's shower you with blessings

Sharon

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:44:40 PM AEST
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LadyDama, this is a terrific write.... you have portrayed the sadness well.....
Jenni

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:53:38 PM AEST
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I love your style so much!
My dear friend, I hate to see you feeling pain like this. Write it out and please don't call it quits.
Kara

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:57:07 PM AEST
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Hey, I just read this again and I see now that it's not life you're calling quits on. I hope that whatever happens and whatever you decide to do leaves you in peace once more.
Kara

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 01:12:25 AM AEST
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I really like this ... the short lines give emphasis to what you say ... and I understand your feelings of frustration - be strong ... Jan

Re: call it quits (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Friday, 28th March 2003 @ 03:52:25 AM AEST
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LD
So soon
I swoon
thou cans't not call a halt
I feel
surreal
I hope it's not my fault
new eyes
I tries
to read your every one
so see
for me
You've got to carry on

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