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But more likely you didn't care.
Never more than now
Have I understood that life's not fair.

You mock me when you look at him.
Laugh at me with your eyes.
Telling me without having to say a word
That in the end you got the guy.

You feign innocence, pretending nothing's wrong.
You think I sould be happy for you
So I fake a smile, all the while
Wishing you two would be through.

But happy endings don't exist for me,
And there's nothing I can do.
I guess I should have realized
That dreams and wishes never really come true. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 43 [informant] => ell_03 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Becuase You've Won, I've Lost

Contributed by ell_03 on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 10:08:03 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You say you didn't know,
But more likely you didn't care.
Never more than now
Have I understood that life's not fair.

You mock me when you look at him.
Laugh at me with your eyes.
Telling me without having to say a word
That in the end you got the guy.

You feign innocence, pretending nothing's wrong.
You think I sould be happy for you
So I fake a smile, all the while
Wishing you two would be through.

But happy endings don't exist for me,
And there's nothing I can do.
I guess I should have realized
That dreams and wishes never really come true.

Copyright © ell_03 ... [ 2009-04-17 22:08:03]
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Re: Becuase You've Won, I've Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 10:30:53 PM AEST
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Sad but well written.
Dreams do come true but sometimes we dream the wrong dreams.
Hang tuff.
It just might not be the right place and time for you.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Becuase You've Won, I've Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 06:48:27 AM AEST
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I don't know why but this poem hit me like a stab in my heart.As simple as it may seem it still caused emotional overload.

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