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Array ( [sid] => 149190 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever One [time] => 2009-04-17 03:37:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I grow old, and fear I’m dated.
You see a man who’s stood the test of time.
I grow tired, and fear I’m fading.
You see a man whose strength is in his years.

You grow old, and see your gray hair.
I see the trials we have overcome.
You grow tired, and see your wrinkles.
I see the good times we’ve been blessed to share.

We grow old, but we’re together.
Together we have sailed the seas of change
We grow tired, into that dark night.
And I thank God we go forever one
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Forever One

Contributed by manbeast on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 03:37:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I grow old, and fear I’m dated.
You see a man who’s stood the test of time.
I grow tired, and fear I’m fading.
You see a man whose strength is in his years.

You grow old, and see your gray hair.
I see the trials we have overcome.
You grow tired, and see your wrinkles.
I see the good times we’ve been blessed to share.

We grow old, but we’re together.
Together we have sailed the seas of change
We grow tired, into that dark night.
And I thank God we go forever one

Copyright Â© manbeast ... [ 2009-04-17 03:37:18]
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Re: Forever One (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:53:44 PM AEST
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This is so sweet.
I adore the fact that your luv is for ever.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
You just don't see that much these days.

Re: Forever One (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:54:23 PM AEST
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Very nice. I really like this one..

Thanks for sharing it with us.

Take care,

Tim

Re: Forever One (User Rating: 1 )
by irodethetrain2u on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 12:24:39 AM AEST
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beautiful and touching!

Re: Forever One (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Saturday, 18th April 2009 @ 10:35:21 PM AEST
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I like this one too. I just don't like it as much as your other two. It seems a little forced to me. Like you knew what you wanted to say; but not quite how you wanted to say it.

Good write though and as always, thanks for sharing!
Carol
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Re: Forever One (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 07:14:36 PM AEST
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An adorable write it made me smile.
Love is beautiful.

Michelle

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