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Array ( [sid] => 149164 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Change [time] => 2009-04-15 20:53:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You watched me change
You saw me change
Into the person I am today
You saw me change on the inside
A view nobody else could see
You held my hand as I swam
Barely keeping my head above the water
You sat with me through the funeral
Of who I used to be
And told me it was okay
When everyone else said to give up
You made me a better person
A happier person
You were with me through it all
You saw me change
On the inside
A view no one else
Could ever see [comments] => 4 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 43 [informant] => razorbladekisses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Change

Contributed by razorbladekisses on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 08:53:01 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

You watched me change
You saw me change
Into the person I am today
You saw me change on the inside
A view nobody else could see
You held my hand as I swam
Barely keeping my head above the water
You sat with me through the funeral
Of who I used to be
And told me it was okay
When everyone else said to give up
You made me a better person
A happier person
You were with me through it all
You saw me change
On the inside
A view no one else
Could ever see

Copyright © razorbladekisses ... [ 2009-04-15 20:53:01]
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Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by GODS_HATED_ONE on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 08:59:14 PM AEST
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VERY NICE GOOD WORK

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by dhart420 on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 09:10:43 PM AEST
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another great read from RBkisses. You knew i was gonna like that before you posted it!

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 09:54:22 PM AEST
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I would just say, lines 8-9 are very nice, loved that part.

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 10:49:34 PM AEST
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This is a very nice poem. Im glad that someone was there to support you in those times of change.

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