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Array ( [sid] => 149160 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dust [time] => 2009-04-15 14:40:17 [hometext] => inspired by... well, they'll know. no rhyme or rhythm to it... [bodytext] => Forever is an awfully long time
But I'd gladly spend it with you
The days could pass in seconds
And I wouldn't care; as long as I'm with you
A year has almost passed
And I still can't get enough
Your scent, your taste
You're the most divine creature

A lot has been said between us
Everything has been shared
There have been fights,
But we always make up
We spent nearly a week away from them
All the people who judge us
And that week made us stronger,
Made me and you pull together

I love you, my dear
From the bottom of my heart
With every ounce of my being
With all my heart and soul
I love the way you love me so purely
Though you say the love isn't pure
I believe that we could run away
That we should leave all the rest

There isn't much else I could say
Other than I love you
The way that you make me feel
I simply cannot deny

Though love is defined many ways
I cannot find one simple definition
That matches how I feel about you
Love has no boundries for us

Without you, there is no air
There is no sun
There is no life

I am a simple lifeless shell without you
Made of dust
That drifts in the nonexistant wind... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Innocent_Sinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Dust

Contributed by Innocent_Sinner on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 02:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Forever is an awfully long time
But I'd gladly spend it with you
The days could pass in seconds
And I wouldn't care; as long as I'm with you
A year has almost passed
And I still can't get enough
Your scent, your taste
You're the most divine creature

A lot has been said between us
Everything has been shared
There have been fights,
But we always make up
We spent nearly a week away from them
All the people who judge us
And that week made us stronger,
Made me and you pull together

I love you, my dear
From the bottom of my heart
With every ounce of my being
With all my heart and soul
I love the way you love me so purely
Though you say the love isn't pure
I believe that we could run away
That we should leave all the rest

There isn't much else I could say
Other than I love you
The way that you make me feel
I simply cannot deny

Though love is defined many ways
I cannot find one simple definition
That matches how I feel about you
Love has no boundries for us

Without you, there is no air
There is no sun
There is no life

I am a simple lifeless shell without you
Made of dust
That drifts in the nonexistant wind...

Copyright © Innocent_Sinner ... [ 2009-04-15 14:40:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 03:31:37 PM AEST
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I actually quite enjoyed this. Some parts felt repetative, like it could have been 2/3 as long and maybe had a more concentrated impact, but overall I think it held together quite nicely. NIcely done, I hope to read more soon.

Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by wood on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 03:59:48 PM AEST
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great work keep crackin at it though i see potential
~Freshmen 012

Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 06:44:39 AM AEST
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i like the freedom and power of this write, good job.

-Phil

Re: Dust (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Thursday, 16th April 2009 @ 11:25:23 AM AEST
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omg...!
*blushes*

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