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Array ( [sid] => 14915 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => come back mommy [time] => 2003-03-26 02:45:00 [hometext] => so many feelings....all my poems are spawned from actual happenings and thoughts and this will probably be one of my stronger ones [bodytext] => Mommy
It hurts so bad
I have become so sad
You have left me though
And now my pain does flow

Mommy
I am so scared
When I cried everyone stared
Every night I sit alone
It seems like your heart has turned to stone

Mommy
I took the pills
Now I'm getting the chills
My stomach really aches
Please hear my cries for gosh sakes

Mommy
I cry my silent tears
Because of how I fear
You will come to yell at me
If you ever came and see

Mommy
My heart is racing
And soon death I'll be facing
I cannot stand up anymore
So I'm just laying on the floor

Mommy
Why did you let me become this way
Why couldn't you have stayed
I've taken my last pills now
And it's finally time to say chow

But mommy
Please come back to me
I wish that you would choose to see
Just how bad I've came to be
Because now I have to leave

[comments] => 6 [counter] => 327 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lostforgood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

come back mommy

Contributed by lostforgood on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 02:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Mommy
It hurts so bad
I have become so sad
You have left me though
And now my pain does flow

Mommy
I am so scared
When I cried everyone stared
Every night I sit alone
It seems like your heart has turned to stone

Mommy
I took the pills
Now I'm getting the chills
My stomach really aches
Please hear my cries for gosh sakes

Mommy
I cry my silent tears
Because of how I fear
You will come to yell at me
If you ever came and see

Mommy
My heart is racing
And soon death I'll be facing
I cannot stand up anymore
So I'm just laying on the floor

Mommy
Why did you let me become this way
Why couldn't you have stayed
I've taken my last pills now
And it's finally time to say chow

But mommy
Please come back to me
I wish that you would choose to see
Just how bad I've came to be
Because now I have to leave

Copyright © lostforgood ... [ 2003-03-26 02:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: come back mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 06:25:49 AM AEST
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Sad poem. much pain is seen. venkat

Re: come back mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:38:57 AM AEST
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This is so sad. Such emotion. Very good writing.

sleepless_siren

Re: come back mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 12:00:51 PM AEST
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This is so sad, i'm gonna cry. On the actually poem part, i'm not sure if i like some of the rhyme, but it doesn't take away from the poem, which, like i said, is really sad. I'm sorry whatever it is that made you write it happened. xXx

Re: come back mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 30th March 2003 @ 01:09:21 PM AEST
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ach, this so sad, i have to disagree with the comment above, i think the way the poem is written helps ontribute to the atmosphere of the poem

Re: come back mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem...

Re: come back mommy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 02:08:39 PM AEST
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Fantasicly written

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