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joyful explosion
Contributed by
n2dep2care
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Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 08:46:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your eyes absorb my hunger. I feel them caressing, wanting, taking me. They stir your fire as you watch me burn. My body ready, my heart starved, my desire uncontrolled as your eyes penetrate and explore. Bringing me to heated, anxious, joyful explosion.
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Re: joyful explosion
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 10:54:26 AM AEST (User
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fantastic once again. you're a top poet who uses so few words to generate massive effect.
-Phil |
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Re: joyful explosion
(User Rating: 1 ) by fredmonte101 on
Saturday, 14th June 2014 @ 01:24:34 PM AEST (User
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Now that was well expressed. |
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