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Array ( [sid] => 149127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Collision(Dream) [time] => 2009-04-14 06:23:58 [hometext] => " A terrible meeting of solar bodies in the dreamworld" HOPE YOU ENJOY!!! [bodytext] => All night, you weighed me up, globular, a mad-god eye,
From your jeweled grove. What weight can measure the
Sky when you unbalance so. Dark sided circumference, always
Hidden, maybe you’ve lived forever,

Planetoid Eidelon, enlarging the night, your orbit incalculable, oblong
And ancient. It frightens me to death. Staring down and down
Through the filmy epidermal sky-layers, Weightlessly, Yet
Terrifically powerful, a back lit sea magnet,

I think I will die if I look any longer, you wade across the ocean
Like a conscious balloon, Closer, Closer, falling, your singular eye askew.
Bulging horrendously, The vertical approach begins,
Bobbing ever closer.

Now I’m finished, The sky is a moon, A billion liters of water
Rise up to meet the lop-sided prospect, Incoming.
I watch this enormous death-ball trundling upward, or maybe side ward,
A cratered catastrophe, the Earth converse,

The impact will end me, antipodal bodies obliterate each other.
A titanic gravitational expulsion… then nothing.

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The Collision(Dream)

Contributed by zenith66 on Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 06:23:58 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

All night, you weighed me up, globular, a mad-god eye,
From your jeweled grove. What weight can measure the
Sky when you unbalance so. Dark sided circumference, always
Hidden, maybe you’ve lived forever,

Planetoid Eidelon, enlarging the night, your orbit incalculable, oblong
And ancient. It frightens me to death. Staring down and down
Through the filmy epidermal sky-layers, Weightlessly, Yet
Terrifically powerful, a back lit sea magnet,

I think I will die if I look any longer, you wade across the ocean
Like a conscious balloon, Closer, Closer, falling, your singular eye askew.
Bulging horrendously, The vertical approach begins,
Bobbing ever closer.

Now I’m finished, The sky is a moon, A billion liters of water
Rise up to meet the lop-sided prospect, Incoming.
I watch this enormous death-ball trundling upward, or maybe side ward,
A cratered catastrophe, the Earth converse,

The impact will end me, antipodal bodies obliterate each other.
A titanic gravitational expulsion… then nothing.

Copyright Â© zenith66 ... [ 2009-04-14 06:23:58]
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Re: The Collision(Dream) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 05:40:53 PM AEST
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Okay, this is pretty scary, yet in some way very beautiful because of the vivid imagery you use. I felt as though I was witnessing the universe's creation and destruction all in one fell swoop.

Thanks,

Tim

Re: The Collision(Dream) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 04:54:21 PM AEST
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Well holy heck zenith!! I do remember reading this, but could not comment for lack
of any kind of articulation. I think Tim's observation was excellent, but upon reading
it a second and third time, it now feels to me like a disturbance in the cosmic forces
have shifted the path of a planet and it is now crashing into Earth ... quite the dream,
dear poet! O_o

lol

As always your descriptions astound and amaze me. You are like the Stephen King
of YPDC, (for your sheer talent at descriptive expression). Your work is brilliant!!

Always a pleasure to read you,

~ Breezy
^_^

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