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with death inside my eyes
my teeth are glazing blood
i can taste the fruit of life

I choose my meal with thought
a fresh, a young, a new
a healthy glow within minutes
turning white and blue

The screams heard throughout the lost town
the blood not keeping in
it is a painted canvas
left on my attacking scene

There after a place is empty
that no man dare to go
this place it is my life
my journey
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Vampire

Contributed by Arty_Sydney on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 01:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I crawl into the night
with death inside my eyes
my teeth are glazing blood
i can taste the fruit of life

I choose my meal with thought
a fresh, a young, a new
a healthy glow within minutes
turning white and blue

The screams heard throughout the lost town
the blood not keeping in
it is a painted canvas
left on my attacking scene

There after a place is empty
that no man dare to go
this place it is my life
my journey
my home

Copyright © Arty_Sydney ... [ 2003-03-26 01:45:00]
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Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 05:55:21 AM AEST
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you have very good talen.. good style.. some people may like this type of poems but I forget this after reading. .. venkat

Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 08:36:16 AM AEST
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This is certainly not the work of a beginner. It is excellant. I love dark poetry and this was amazing. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more.

sleepless_siren

Re: Vampire (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 4th April 2003 @ 11:23:35 PM AEST
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Beginner you say, with this poem you dont sound like one.
Very dark and bloody, very gothic I the traits I like.
Keep up the writing, if you say you a beginner now cant wait for what you got when become a legend.

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