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Array ( [sid] => 149087 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Angel [time] => 2009-04-12 19:35:32 [hometext] => It's amazing how something as simple as love can change your life forever, and when that love is cut short by tragedy, both lives are ruined [bodytext] => I heard my angel in a child's laugh
and saw her in a dream
Her eyes were like those stars at night
which have the brightest gleam
They showed me love, and showed me peace
A glimpse at heaven's gate
And when she smiled and kissed my lips,
my heart began to race

I saw the sun, I saw the moon,
the stars that fill the sky
They paled beside her radiant face
and those beautiful green eyes
When I awoke I almost cried
for she was gone, it seemed
I wish to God there was a way
to live inside a dream

Now, everytime I close my eyes
I see her glowing face.
But, never will I kiss her lips
so full of hope and grace
I know that she's still with me though,
I feel her all the time
I smell her hair inside a rose
and taste her lips with sweet red wine

I heard my angel in a child's laugh
and saw her in a dream
Her eyes lit up my life that night
and killed me with their gleam [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 22 [informant] => RyhmeNotReason [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
My Angel

Contributed by RyhmeNotReason on Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 07:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I heard my angel in a child's laugh
and saw her in a dream
Her eyes were like those stars at night
which have the brightest gleam
They showed me love, and showed me peace
A glimpse at heaven's gate
And when she smiled and kissed my lips,
my heart began to race

I saw the sun, I saw the moon,
the stars that fill the sky
They paled beside her radiant face
and those beautiful green eyes
When I awoke I almost cried
for she was gone, it seemed
I wish to God there was a way
to live inside a dream

Now, everytime I close my eyes
I see her glowing face.
But, never will I kiss her lips
so full of hope and grace
I know that she's still with me though,
I feel her all the time
I smell her hair inside a rose
and taste her lips with sweet red wine

I heard my angel in a child's laugh
and saw her in a dream
Her eyes lit up my life that night
and killed me with their gleam




Copyright © RyhmeNotReason ... [ 2009-04-12 19:35:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by crmnlilbruno on Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 10:02:36 PM AEST
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Simply Amazing, I loved every bit of it. am just in AWWW... keep up the good work, great write


Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 02:23:40 PM AEST
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Oh this is so very beautiful.... Extraordinarily so.. I loved it.. I am sorry for your loss..but like you said..she is alive in you....
Great work..
Jenni


Re: My Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 22nd April 2009 @ 06:07:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful flow to this write,

I smell her hair inside a rose, that is pretty.

Michelle




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