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I don’t know what it is?
Did you come to my life on purpose?
Or it was just an accident;
Was it a curse or a grace upon me?
Should I be happy or desperate?
******
If it is a curse;
Why I don’t want to be saved?
If it is a grace;
Why eyes never dry?
*****
Are you the ONE?
Or finding you was a mistake?
Are you the ANGEL?
Or you’re the DEAMON of my life?
******

How desperate I am!
Knowing not what to do
Why I am always in fall
Will I see spring again?
Did my past with you was good or bad;
How the Future will be?
******
Yet so be whatever it be
What all I know is
You did lessen other’s love in me;
What all I know is whoever you are
Still you are the INSPIRATION.

The Well-Wisher

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In Between

Contributed by the-phoenix on Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 04:29:39 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

iN bETWEEN

I don’t know what it is?
Did you come to my life on purpose?
Or it was just an accident;
Was it a curse or a grace upon me?
Should I be happy or desperate?
******
If it is a curse;
Why I don’t want to be saved?
If it is a grace;
Why eyes never dry?
*****
Are you the ONE?
Or finding you was a mistake?
Are you the ANGEL?
Or you’re the DEAMON of my life?
******

How desperate I am!
Knowing not what to do
Why I am always in fall
Will I see spring again?
Did my past with you was good or bad;
How the Future will be?
******
Yet so be whatever it be
What all I know is
You did lessen other’s love in me;
What all I know is whoever you are
Still you are the INSPIRATION.

The Well-Wisher

Copyright Â© the-phoenix ... [ 2009-04-12 16:29:39]
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Re: In Between (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Sunday, 12th April 2009 @ 09:31:02 PM AEST
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Though I enjoyed the read, at times within this piece it was hard to understand, maybe it was the way you started a line that threw me off, but thanks for the read.

The Phantom

Re: In Between (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 01:48:36 PM AEST
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Quite an enjoyable read and a wonderful piece BUT there are some grammatical errors which threw the poem off course. Feel free to let me know if you want help with this. All it takes is a PM..
Jenni

Re: In Between (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Tuesday, 14th April 2009 @ 12:42:31 AM AEST
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A phenix from the new burnt flames
Comes to write new poetry
with blazing power of devine indifference
A new burning fire of poetry from the phenix

What I mean is I like the poem it's new as are you from what I gather welcome to the site
hope to read more soon
-kelly

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