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Array ( [sid] => 149038 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Addiction [time] => 2009-04-10 18:42:08 [hometext] => please rate and comment... it's not exactly erotic or anything but it's a little bit implying. you've been warned!! OH and bolded text is taken from Twilight XD and italicized is just for fun! It's a bit of a topsy turvy storyline though... [bodytext] => I have a new addiction
That addiction is you
I know I shouldn't feel this way
But I just can't let go
The feeling I get when I'm with you
It makes me come alive
You're like a type of heroin to
A recovering drug-addict...

The most forbidden delicacy

When I think about our love
It makes my head spin
The way you make me feel
Is absolutely amazing...
The way I need you so
Is a forbidden thing, I know
But this drug addict must
Replace you with the heroin

Your scent to me is alluring
Your eyes pull me in
I simply have to be with you,
Even though this is a sin

Any other person
Any other time
I know it wouldn't be half as good
Because I know you're mine

We belong together now
No matter what they say
I can feel it in my heart
That this isn't just an addiction
Your body isn't the only thing
But you mind, heart, and soul
I need to feel you near me
You've got to let me in

Years it's been since I met you
And since we have been an us
Though few things have changed
One thing did
Everyone knows now
They all look and judge
The disadvantages of living
In a small town

Everyone looks at us
As I walk down the halls
I take your hand in mine
And tell you, 'Baby, it's alright.'
You smile at me,
Though you're not sure
This isn't just an addiction,
Though it's not anymore. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Innocent_Sinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Addiction

Contributed by Innocent_Sinner on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 06:42:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I have a new addiction
That addiction is you
I know I shouldn't feel this way
But I just can't let go
The feeling I get when I'm with you
It makes me come alive
You're like a type of heroin to
A recovering drug-addict...

The most forbidden delicacy

When I think about our love
It makes my head spin
The way you make me feel
Is absolutely amazing...
The way I need you so
Is a forbidden thing, I know
But this drug addict must
Replace you with the heroin

Your scent to me is alluring
Your eyes pull me in
I simply have to be with you,
Even though this is a sin

Any other person
Any other time
I know it wouldn't be half as good
Because I know you're mine

We belong together now
No matter what they say
I can feel it in my heart
That this isn't just an addiction
Your body isn't the only thing
But you mind, heart, and soul
I need to feel you near me
You've got to let me in

Years it's been since I met you
And since we have been an us
Though few things have changed
One thing did
Everyone knows now
They all look and judge
The disadvantages of living
In a small town

Everyone looks at us
As I walk down the halls
I take your hand in mine
And tell you, 'Baby, it's alright.'
You smile at me,
Though you're not sure
This isn't just an addiction,
Though it's not anymore.




Copyright © Innocent_Sinner ... [ 2009-04-10 18:42:08]
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Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th April 2009 @ 07:29:31 PM AEST
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I'm reading the first twilight book at the moment, and this is a perfect description of the love story. it flowed well, used excellent description and had a touch of irony. excellent work.

-Phil


Re: Addiction (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlightKiss on Wednesday, 15th April 2009 @ 11:37:30 AM AEST
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omg...
*blushes*
this isnt about me is it?




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