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[sid] => 149015
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Final Step
[time] => 2009-04-09 14:52:48
[hometext] => I wrote this in like... two seconds. So don't kill me with the comments, please!
[bodytext] => I see the way you look at him The way he looks at you It always tears me apart Because of how I love you I really shouldn't care so much, As I know you love me too But every time he touches you It makes me want to scream at you Do you know how jealous I am? Do you know how it makes me cut? Did you see my wrist that night? Did you see the dark pink scars? I know it's not really your fault That I react so badly to this feeling But I need a way to release The bad energy that rages inside This jealousy, it makes no sense To either me or you And I know my cutting scares you But I need to do it now It's been so long since you've been near him But I still hate how he looks at you The longing is obvious in his eyes The need for you so clear I caught you in the act My deepest fears confirmed... The love I gave to you Is not to be returned You've given him your love now And taken it from me So now I feel that I Have no more reason to live So I stand on top of this building Ready to jump The fall will be exhillarating But the landing, not so fun... My hand is shaking as I write this final goodbye... I confess I've always loved you But I know it's no longer returned... I set the note on the ground, under a rock... Maybe you, someday, will find it... Then I take a deep breath and step over the edge... I take the final step... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Innocent_Sinner [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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