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My voice cries out in silent pleas
Everyone passes, yet no one sees
My heart is near its final beat
There is someone new I have to meet

Not much time left to do my deeds
I still have unplanted seeds
The mission that was placed within my care
Was for me alone, though some tried to share

Their help for which I will be always glad
They never knew how much influence they had
Now as my heart slows to forever stop
I do not want them to think I forgot

A few more beats is al I have left in time
Believe me when I say the pleasure was all mine
As the final pulses thump in my chest
I know I have given life my best

Deadwriter
04/08/2009

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My Hearts Last Beat

Contributed by deadwriter on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 06:24:39 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

My Hearts Last Beat

My voice cries out in silent pleas
Everyone passes, yet no one sees
My heart is near its final beat
There is someone new I have to meet

Not much time left to do my deeds
I still have unplanted seeds
The mission that was placed within my care
Was for me alone, though some tried to share

Their help for which I will be always glad
They never knew how much influence they had
Now as my heart slows to forever stop
I do not want them to think I forgot

A few more beats is al I have left in time
Believe me when I say the pleasure was all mine
As the final pulses thump in my chest
I know I have given life my best

Deadwriter
04/08/2009

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Re: My Hearts Last Beat (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 07:23:23 AM AEST
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As so many said to me when I was, at what seemed my lowest, I hope that this is just writing and that it isnt going to be put into action. This was a great piece of writing dont get me wrong but just know that you have a friend here if you need to talk. Although we think that we are meant to walk this path alone...we are joined by friends to help us bear our heavy loads.

Rich

Re: My Hearts Last Beat (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 08:39:53 AM AEST
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I am at loss of words..this is breath taking..I pray this should be limited to feelings of a poet in writing..
God blees you love and happiness:-)venkat

Re: My Hearts Last Beat (User Rating: 1 )
by crmnlilbruno on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 04:54:11 PM AEST
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Well Writen, and also hope that this is just a writing,
For I will reach out my hand
In your direction to help you stand
You can talk to us in times of need
For poetry is someting our emotions feed

Just keep the good writes comming, This one is GREAT.. once again hope it is just a write cause i am hoping ot see many more like it comming from you 8) Aaron D. Carman

Re: My Hearts Last Beat (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 11:52:46 PM AEST
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Oh my friend so beautiful in its sadness.
It almost made me cry. I am here if you need me,
hugs you tight

Michelle

Re: My Hearts Last Beat (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 13th April 2009 @ 08:41:15 PM AEST
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You have indeed given life your best, my friend.... and you deserve the best out of life. And believe me when I say, you have lots more heart beats to share.....
Warm hugs..
Jenni

Re: My Hearts Last Beat (User Rating: 1 )
by TeRrahiel on Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 03:06:05 AM AEST
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I doubt if a person who didn't experience something terrible could write such a great poem.

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