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[sid] => 148971
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The Girl
[time] => 2009-04-07 19:26:58
[hometext] => This is a poem i wrote for this girl i really like and i want some more opinions on it as its my first poem
[bodytext] => Since I met her I havn't felt the same Her blue eyes staring back at me Her lips as soft as the clouds them self Her smile that shone through the dark She's like a star bright in my gloomy sky I tried to say I loved her but boy was I to afraid Afraid that she will turn me down Afraid that she will cast me back To the hell I have lived How can I tell her all thats in my mind This passion for her I cannot defeat That beats like a drum when I'm with her [comments] => 1 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Love-Challenge [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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