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Array ( [sid] => 148957 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dance [time] => 2009-04-07 00:55:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Forever lost in an emotional dance
Every step taken is taking a chance

Dips and lifts come and go
Stumbles and spins interrupt the flow

Hand in hand moving along
Moving smoothly to life's Love song

Learning to dance with one another
Learning to forget about all others

Taking another step towards the end
Allowing each other to be a friend

Accepting each other as the one
Will bring chances to have more then fun

Following the steps of each others leads
Helps to satisfy both your needs

Dips, lifts, stumble and spin
Done together bolt you win

Winning true love in an emotional dance
Allows the beauty of true romance

So take each others hand
And start to dance were you stand

If done together It can't go wrong
Dance together in life's love song...

Aaron D. Carman [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => crmnlilbruno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Dance

Contributed by crmnlilbruno on Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 12:55:33 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Forever lost in an emotional dance
Every step taken is taking a chance

Dips and lifts come and go
Stumbles and spins interrupt the flow

Hand in hand moving along
Moving smoothly to life's Love song

Learning to dance with one another
Learning to forget about all others

Taking another step towards the end
Allowing each other to be a friend

Accepting each other as the one
Will bring chances to have more then fun

Following the steps of each others leads
Helps to satisfy both your needs

Dips, lifts, stumble and spin
Done together bolt you win

Winning true love in an emotional dance
Allows the beauty of true romance

So take each others hand
And start to dance were you stand

If done together It can't go wrong
Dance together in life's love song...

Aaron D. Carman

Copyright © crmnlilbruno ... [ 2009-04-07 00:55:33]
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Re: Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 09:29:34 PM AEST
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Very clear message here, very nice flow easy on the eyes, well done.

The Phantom

Re: Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 05:58:00 AM AEST
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Beautifull dancing.
Awesome write.
huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy

Re: Dance (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Wednesday, 8th April 2009 @ 07:24:39 PM AEST
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The paired lines, AA, BB, CC, etc, rhyme, gave it that sing-songy feel, which felt quite appropriate given the topic. Good job to you mr. Aaron D. Carman.

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