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Array ( [sid] => 148955 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cherry Blossoms [time] => 2009-04-06 18:31:32 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Cherry blossoms in the nape of your neck,
I kiss it gently, just a peck,
Strawberries nestled in your hair,
I pick enough so I can share,
Peach juice glistening on your chest,
Licking it is simply the best,

Your eyes like sunflowers,
Your voice like a bird,
Your laugh like bells,
Your mouth that whispers sweet words,

I love you,
I love you,
I love you,

Your body,
Home to sweet scents,
Your kindness,
Never stop giving out compliments,
Your mind,
Sharp as a tack, you are
And your smile
Which brings light to places near and places far,

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Cherry Blossoms

Contributed by 12161216 on Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 06:31:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Cherry blossoms in the nape of your neck,
I kiss it gently, just a peck,
Strawberries nestled in your hair,
I pick enough so I can share,
Peach juice glistening on your chest,
Licking it is simply the best,

Your eyes like sunflowers,
Your voice like a bird,
Your laugh like bells,
Your mouth that whispers sweet words,

I love you,
I love you,
I love you,

Your body,
Home to sweet scents,
Your kindness,
Never stop giving out compliments,
Your mind,
Sharp as a tack, you are
And your smile
Which brings light to places near and places far,

Copyright © 12161216 ... [ 2009-04-06 18:31:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Cherry Blossoms (User Rating: 1 )
by 3660Days on Monday, 6th April 2009 @ 06:43:02 PM AEST
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Some of the rhymes seemed "forced"

the imagery was very nice.

"strawberries nestled in your hair"

and the triple "i love you", almost like an echo.

Re: Cherry Blossoms (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 12:07:25 AM AEST
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The title drew me to the poem, this is a nice write.
The entire write made me smile.

Michelle

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