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Array ( [sid] => 148910 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BE MY LOVE [time] => 2009-04-04 09:46:40 [hometext] => MY FIRST POETRY DEDICATED TO ALL THE REDERS [bodytext] => YOU GIFTED MY HEART AN INTENSE PASSION
WHICH HAD NO PERFECT DIMENSION.
YOU ARE THE ONE I LOVE OINDRILA
'CAUSE YOU ARE MY PRINCESS CINDRELLA.

I DON'T KNOW HOW
BUT I HAVE TO SAY THIS NOW
HEAR MY CALL
IF YOU HAVE TIME AT ALL.

I AM LONELY WITHOUT YOU,HONEY
EVEN MONEY
SEEMS TO BE UNCANNY.

WE WILL LIVE TOGETHER IN THE COLD
AWAY FROM THIS THUNDERBOLT
AND TURN THIS EARTH INTO GOLD.

YOU LOOK BEAUTIFUL WITHOUT SPECS
WHEN YOU WALK BESIDES THE LAKES
SET YOUR HAIRS FREE
FOR IT'S TIME TO GLEE.

I DREAM OF HOW WE'LL SHARE A CUSHION
AND YOURS UP AND DOWN MOTION
WILL PRODUCE SO MUCH LOTION
THAT EVEN THE VENUS WOULD CEASE ITS ROTATION.

UNDER THE MOONLIGHT YOUR LIPS SHINE
I CAN'T WAIT TILL THEY TOUCH MINE.
I CRAVE ONLY FOR A GENTLE KISS
AND I WILL TAKE IT TO THE LEES.

THE TIME IS DRAWING NEAR TO SAY
IT'S NEARLY END FOR THE DAY
WHEN YOU BLUSH,THE DEVILS RUSH
HAVE GUTS TO SAY
YOU HAVE A CRUSH
TILL TODAY.

DONT THINK THESE ARE ALL BLUFF
I PRAY THEE LIKE A DOVE
PLEASE COME AND BE MY LOVE.....

SPARE ONE MINUTE TO HEAR MY DEAR
I CARE,I CARE FOR YOU.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 2 [informant] => JACKS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
BE MY LOVE

Contributed by JACKS on Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 09:46:40 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



YOU GIFTED MY HEART AN INTENSE PASSION
WHICH HAD NO PERFECT DIMENSION.
YOU ARE THE ONE I LOVE OINDRILA
'CAUSE YOU ARE MY PRINCESS CINDRELLA.

I DON'T KNOW HOW
BUT I HAVE TO SAY THIS NOW
HEAR MY CALL
IF YOU HAVE TIME AT ALL.

I AM LONELY WITHOUT YOU,HONEY
EVEN MONEY
SEEMS TO BE UNCANNY.

WE WILL LIVE TOGETHER IN THE COLD
AWAY FROM THIS THUNDERBOLT
AND TURN THIS EARTH INTO GOLD.

YOU LOOK BEAUTIFUL WITHOUT SPECS
WHEN YOU WALK BESIDES THE LAKES
SET YOUR HAIRS FREE
FOR IT'S TIME TO GLEE.

I DREAM OF HOW WE'LL SHARE A CUSHION
AND YOURS UP AND DOWN MOTION
WILL PRODUCE SO MUCH LOTION
THAT EVEN THE VENUS WOULD CEASE ITS ROTATION.

UNDER THE MOONLIGHT YOUR LIPS SHINE
I CAN'T WAIT TILL THEY TOUCH MINE.
I CRAVE ONLY FOR A GENTLE KISS
AND I WILL TAKE IT TO THE LEES.

THE TIME IS DRAWING NEAR TO SAY
IT'S NEARLY END FOR THE DAY
WHEN YOU BLUSH,THE DEVILS RUSH
HAVE GUTS TO SAY
YOU HAVE A CRUSH
TILL TODAY.

DONT THINK THESE ARE ALL BLUFF
I PRAY THEE LIKE A DOVE
PLEASE COME AND BE MY LOVE.....

SPARE ONE MINUTE TO HEAR MY DEAR
I CARE,I CARE FOR YOU.




Copyright © JACKS ... [ 2009-04-04 09:46:40]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: BE MY LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Balmain_Tiger on Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 10:06:48 AM AEST
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Some pleas are on deaf ears. some get lucky, time will tell. Good luck


Re: BE MY LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:20:25 AM AEST
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I though this poem was full of emotion, thank you for shareing.

The Phantom




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