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Array ( [sid] => 14890 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => This Girl [time] => 2003-03-25 18:25:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Its amazing you tested this love so soon
Why did you make pain a feeling tycoon
Went out with my enemy, thats low
That just proves how low you can go
My feelings for you rained through the nights
But these same feelings,
Got us through some rough fights
But now my tears clean my face of you
Ever since those words
You've made it clear, we're through
I thought it was meant to be, you disagreed
When i was desiring you, you fleed
The late nights, we spent on the phone
And when we werent on the phone,
Well I was there at your home
Alright, you know what?
Now you want me back
So i said yes, I love you.

This time it will be better
If she wants to kiss, I might as well let her
I wont let the past determine the future
Or whats ahead
Because if do,
This love might as well already be dead. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 24 [informant] => ThaMikeMan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

This Girl

Contributed by ThaMikeMan on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Its amazing you tested this love so soon
Why did you make pain a feeling tycoon
Went out with my enemy, thats low
That just proves how low you can go
My feelings for you rained through the nights
But these same feelings,
Got us through some rough fights
But now my tears clean my face of you
Ever since those words
You've made it clear, we're through
I thought it was meant to be, you disagreed
When i was desiring you, you fleed
The late nights, we spent on the phone
And when we werent on the phone,
Well I was there at your home
Alright, you know what?
Now you want me back
So i said yes, I love you.

This time it will be better
If she wants to kiss, I might as well let her
I wont let the past determine the future
Or whats ahead
Because if do,
This love might as well already be dead.

Copyright © ThaMikeMan ... [ 2003-03-25 18:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: This Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:53:46 PM AEST
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So did you kiss her????? I like this you have written something wonderful....well done

Re: This Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 03:43:18 PM AEST
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excellent poem, i love it:) great ending too... hugs nessa

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