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Array ( [sid] => 14889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the state of mind that is loneliness [time] => 2003-03-25 18:05:00 [hometext] => i could ask you to read this but you wouldn't
so im asking you to read the poem either above or below this one. [bodytext] => in my DARKEST hour there is always someone to bring
me back up to the LIGHT but they never seem to stick
around and help me deal, its been so long since i've
had someone to CONFIDE in...and im not too sure how
long i've been holding everything inside. too long
thats for sure, but there was my PRECIOUS she was
the last one i could TRUST, but where is she now it was
just recently that she came back to me expecting me
to be her SUN , her life has also darkened...even
though she needs i mustnt rely on her. i can't go
through that PAIN anymore. its been TOO (two years) long and ive
suffered enough, i mustnt dwell on things for far too
long
i wish i could find someone i could SHARE myself with.

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 24 [informant] => fallensilence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

the state of mind that is loneliness

Contributed by fallensilence on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

in my DARKEST hour there is always someone to bring
me back up to the LIGHT but they never seem to stick
around and help me deal, its been so long since i've
had someone to CONFIDE in...and im not too sure how
long i've been holding everything inside. too long
thats for sure, but there was my PRECIOUS she was
the last one i could TRUST, but where is she now it was
just recently that she came back to me expecting me
to be her SUN , her life has also darkened...even
though she needs i mustnt rely on her. i can't go
through that PAIN anymore. its been TOO (two years) long and ive
suffered enough, i mustnt dwell on things for far too
long
i wish i could find someone i could SHARE myself with.

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-03-25 18:05:00]
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Re: the state of mind that is loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 06:48:08 PM AEST
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I read your poem....the hurt you must feeling ......I hope ;you find that someone to share your life with.....everyone needs someone .....Keep your chin up....keep looking forward....You have alot to live for, don't let anyone tell you different...Your poem is well written....

Re: the state of mind that is loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:58:31 PM AEST
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I see your pain. I know this is a hard thing to go through. Your loneliness shall be cured in time. I wish that time to come very soon for you.
kara

Re: the state of mind that is loneliness (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:28:07 PM AEST
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interesting style - love the emphasis on certain words. loneliness is by far the most painful thing i've ever endured. i know you'll find someone who'll share your beautiful soul with you. great write. Kate x

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