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Array ( [sid] => 148881 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Changes [time] => 2009-04-02 23:39:58 [hometext] => I am putting this out here for my husband who is the author. A real strong man. [bodytext] => Bonnie has chosen a new path for the both of us
She wants to keep GOD's wrath from being bestowed upon us
Change our lives
she doesn't want us in the "Lake of fire"
When we die
Right our wrongs
No more shooting up
No more hittin the bong
This life won't last is the future repeats the past
She says she loves
I know she does
She says we have to sober up
And lose our buzz
Changing our life is a must
We better change or we're going to HELL when we turn to dust [comments] => 2 [counter] => 252 [topic] => 21 [informant] => laurabear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Changes

Contributed by laurabear on Thursday, 2nd April 2009 @ 11:39:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Bonnie has chosen a new path for the both of us
She wants to keep GOD's wrath from being bestowed upon us
Change our lives
she doesn't want us in the "Lake of fire"
When we die
Right our wrongs
No more shooting up
No more hittin the bong
This life won't last is the future repeats the past
She says she loves
I know she does
She says we have to sober up
And lose our buzz
Changing our life is a must
We better change or we're going to HELL when we turn to dust

Copyright © laurabear ... [ 2009-04-02 23:39:58]
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Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 12:37:13 AM AEST
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Welcome and this is really good writing.
I say that hell is where they are right now.
We all gonna turn back to dust someday or at least the physical part anyways. The heart-n-soul w is what lives on. We make our own heaven or hell right here on planet Earth.
I will say prayers for all involved. Only the super natural power of God can heal whatever brought this on.
Pm any time, I'm usually here.
I know it took great courage to post this for all concerned.
Big luv, huggs, blessings, healing, strength, knowledge, wisdom, peace, joy, prayer,
emy

Re: Changes (User Rating: 1 )
by MarcRob on Friday, 3rd April 2009 @ 01:57:17 AM AEST
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Only through the lord Jesus Christ can you find salvation, only God can forgive your sins, you need to ask him. I will pray for your every success I have been there myself, I thought it would help me escape my past, but it ruins the future.
I now write about it.

God Bless, be well.

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