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Array ( [sid] => 14884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => untitled (perception) [time] => 2003-03-25 16:45:00 [hometext] => READ ME!!!! [bodytext] => pure intentions; nothings ever the way it seems
wishing i could change it all (for you)
but i can't cause i have low self esteem

reliving the past while i marvel in your beauty
(nothing is the way it seems)
my neurosis captures your imperfections
this life you think i have curtains
all my pain and misery (isnt it obvious)
noone can understand my existance
(not even me)
i never could understand your persistence.
so lull my insecurities
or i will never again beg you please.

life inside of me
anemic to positivity

pure intentions
(are never what they seems)
wishing i could cahnge it all
but i know im only living in a dream

lies i know all too well
everything has gone to hell. (but nothing is the way it seems)

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 25 [informant] => fallensilence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

untitled (perception)

Contributed by fallensilence on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

pure intentions; nothings ever the way it seems
wishing i could change it all (for you)
but i can't cause i have low self esteem

reliving the past while i marvel in your beauty
(nothing is the way it seems)
my neurosis captures your imperfections
this life you think i have curtains
all my pain and misery (isnt it obvious)
noone can understand my existance
(not even me)
i never could understand your persistence.
so lull my insecurities
or i will never again beg you please.

life inside of me
anemic to positivity

pure intentions
(are never what they seems)
wishing i could cahnge it all
but i know im only living in a dream

lies i know all too well
everything has gone to hell. (but nothing is the way it seems)

Copyright © fallensilence ... [ 2003-03-25 16:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: untitled (perception) (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 07:12:32 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this one too!!
Great stuff!

Re: untitled (perception) (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:05:14 PM AEST
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Unfortunatly life isnt what we seem,But we keep going to improve it! Good one Christina

Re: untitled (perception) (User Rating: 1 )
by tease_whizz on Wednesday, 26th March 2003 @ 04:01:04 PM AEST
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love it - great sense of conflict and ambivalent emotions.

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