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Array ( [sid] => 148835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Dream [time] => 2009-03-31 15:26:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Feel your breath against my pain
Let your arms shield me from the rain
As I breathe in...
I'm confident
I know you can't comprehend
But I need you to try and mend
It may be a crime...
Not just a good time
Maybe someday you will understand
Perhaps one day you'll hold my hand
And tell me you care...
Yes, hope I dare
I dream of you and me forever
I'll admit there might be others better
But I want you
Do you want me too...?
Today, I'll willingly give you my heart
Will you cherish it or tear it apart?
Only time will tell...
Best not to dwell
On me and you; you and me
This chance, this possibility
Is it what it seems?
Is it all just what I dream? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MoonlightKiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

I Dream

Contributed by MoonlightKiss on Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 03:26:29 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Feel your breath against my pain
Let your arms shield me from the rain
As I breathe in...
I'm confident
I know you can't comprehend
But I need you to try and mend
It may be a crime...
Not just a good time
Maybe someday you will understand
Perhaps one day you'll hold my hand
And tell me you care...
Yes, hope I dare
I dream of you and me forever
I'll admit there might be others better
But I want you
Do you want me too...?
Today, I'll willingly give you my heart
Will you cherish it or tear it apart?
Only time will tell...
Best not to dwell
On me and you; you and me
This chance, this possibility
Is it what it seems?
Is it all just what I dream?

Copyright © MoonlightKiss ... [ 2009-03-31 15:26:29]
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Re: I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by crmnlilbruno on Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 04:28:43 PM AEST
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I like it! Good Work.. Keep em commin

Re: I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st March 2009 @ 06:28:12 PM AEST
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very deep, good work.

-phil

Re: I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Wednesday, 1st April 2009 @ 02:59:00 PM AEST
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Well done

Re: I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Sorrow_Bane on Tuesday, 7th April 2009 @ 02:51:30 PM AEST
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Very nice, very deep. For some reason, I feel like connected to it... But I love it. :3

-Sorrow's Bane

Re: I Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by thewizard on Monday, 27th April 2009 @ 11:03:48 AM AEST
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As a lot of words in my poetry come from what I call poetry in dreams, they are words that come to you when you feel pain, love you want but cannot reach. Realy liked this work and hope your dream comes true

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